随着中考时间临近,课成教学研究院优秀英语老师杨春老师为您倾情奉献英语作文中的常用句式,希望对考生和家长有较大帮助。

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杨春老师

●重点本科院校毕业,从事一线英语教学多年,主持编写了《2012-2017年济南市中考真题分类汇编》 、寒暑假《初一英语培训》、寒暑假《初二英语培训》、《初三英语中考冲刺》等教材,所教学生涵盖了小、初各个阶段,尤其擅长小升初、中考英语教学,对小升初考点和中考考点有较强的把控度。

●在不断的教育教学中,始终坚信“兴趣是最好的老师”,所以也逐渐形成了自己的教学风格,注重身教,师生相处和谐,在课堂中,上课气氛活跃,学生参与度高,不断地提高学生英语学习的积极性和主动性,让学生获得英语学习的成就感和自豪感。

杨春老师为大家解答:

一、中考作文评分标准

我们知道中考英语分数,评卷老师绝对不是胡乱按照自己的感觉来给的,他们都有一个统一的标准,如果我们想要得高分的话,就得了解中考英语作文的评分标准,从而有目标性的提高自己的英语写作能力,有计划的得高分。下面是中考英语作文的评分标准。

中考英语作文评分标准:

1、本大题共10分。

2、卷面书写潦草不工整,可酌情从总得分中扣1分。

3、拼写错误每两个扣0.5分。同样错误不重复计算。

4、书面表达可分为四个等级:

(1)9-10分  短文内容符合每幅图画情景,语句通顺,情节连贯,书写工整,无语法错误,字数符合要求。

(2)7-8分  短文内容基本符合图画情景,语句尚通顺,情节较连贯,书写较工整,语法错误较少,1-2处,字数基本符合要求。

(3)5-6分   短文内容基本符合图画情景,语句尚通顺,情节较连贯,书写较工整,3-4处语法错误,字数在60词左右。

(4)5分以下 短文内容不能紧扣图画情景,语句不够通顺,语法错误较多,书写一般,字数在50词以下。

看了上面的评分标准,我们不禁在想:什么样的作文才是阅卷老师眼中的好作文 ?

阅卷老师想看到的好作文:

1、语言(4分):

词——固定搭配、高频重点词汇;

句——复杂句(各种从句)、特殊句型、正确的句子!

2、内容(4分):

(总、分)论点、论据支持句; 简洁、切合主题的记叙内容。

3、结构(2分):

语言结构——句子重点突出、内容清晰;

内容结构——论点、论据以及记叙之间的逻辑关系;

句数控制——对于相对内容的句数掌握;

亮点、出彩点——排比、拟人、谚语、成语、押韵等。

现在随着中考英语总分达到了150分,作文所占的比重越来越大,远远不是只有10分,希望大家掌握好杨春老师所总结的作文常用句子。

二、高分作文写作技巧

01

开头句型选择

1、关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……

There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that____.

2、俗话说(常言道)……,它是我们前辈的经历,但是,即使在今天,它在许多场合仍然适用。

There is an old saying______。 Its the experience of our forefathers,however,it is correct in many cases even today.

3、现在,……,它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先,……;其次,……。更为糟糕的是……。

Today, ____, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ____ Second,____。 What makes things worse is that______.

4、现在,……很普遍,许多人喜欢……,因为……,另外(而且)……。

Nowadays,it is common to ______。 Many people like ______because ______。 Besides,______.

5、任何事物都是有两面性,……也不例外。它既有有利的一面,也有不利的一面。

Everything has two sides and ______is not an exception,it has both advantages and disadvantages.

6、关于……人们的观点各不相同,一些人认为(说)……,在他们看来,……

People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person.Some people say that ______。To them,_____。

7、人类正面临着一个严重的问题……,这个问题变得越来越严重。

Man is now facing a big problem ______which is becoming more and more serious.

8、……已成为人的关注的热门话题,特别是在年青人当中,将引发激烈的辩论。

______ has become a hot topic among people,especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.

9、……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用,它给我们带来了许多好处,但同时也引发一些严重的问题。

______ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

10、根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出……。很显然……,但是为什么呢?

According to thefigure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph,it can be seen that______while. Obviously,______,but why?

11、Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.

最近,…问题已引起人们的关注。

12、Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.

互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题。

13、Nowadays,(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.

如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了。

14、With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…

随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…

02

中间过渡篇

引出不同观点:

1、People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… 。 However, others believe that…。

人们对…的观点因人而异。有些人认为…。。 然而其他人却认为...

2、People may have different opinions on…

人们对…可能会有不同的见解。

3、Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.

人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异。

 

4、There are different opinions among people as to…

关于…。 人们的观点大不相同。

5、Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure)。

对(失败)人们的态度各不相同。

6、A lot of people seem to think that…

很多人似乎认为…

7、It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…

人们一般认为…

8、Many people insist that…

很多人坚持认为…

9. 宾语从句:我认为,…… / 我认为……不 I think / I don't think that …

我想知道是否…… I wonder whether …

例:He doesn't think I should stop him joining the club.他认为我不应该阻止他参加这个俱乐部。

10. Since + 主语+ 过去式, 主语 + 现在完成式。

例:Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.自从他上高中,他就一直很用功。

11. how 引导的感叹句

例:那至少可以证明你很诚实。At least it will prove how honest you are. 

A)如果你不……,你就会…… If you don't …, you'll …

例:If you don't keep working hard, you'll lose the chance. 如果你不坚持努力工作,你就会失去这次机会。

B) 如此 ……,以至于…… so … that …

例:At that moment, I was so upset that I wanted to give up. 当时,我非常伤心,最后都想放弃了。

03

结尾句型篇

1、Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…

把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…

2、Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…

考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…

3、Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…

因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…

4、There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.

毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点。

5、All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.

总之,我们没有…是无法生活的。但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题。

6、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend)。

该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。

 

7、It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …

该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了。

8、不用说…… It goes without saying that = It is obvious that …

例:不用说早睡早起是值得的。It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.

9、……是必要的 It is necessary (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是重要的 It is important(for sb.) to do / that … ……

是适当的 It is proper (for sb.) to do / that … ……

是紧急的 It is urgent (for sb.) to do / that …

例:It is proper for us to keep the public places clean.

It is proper that we (should)keep the public places clean.

我们应当保持公共场所清洁。

 

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